2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：感谢信|考研英语作文(2)

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm help in the process of my(删除my) seeking job conformed to my past decades training, after i(大写)graduated from peking university(两个单词的首字母大写).

If it had not been for your assistance in recommendation (改为recommending)to the prestigious company in China. i(大写)fear that i would have been on the job road (中式英语)back and forth .i really appreciate this precious oppotunity(拼写错误opportunity) which you offered. every one(首字母大写) agrees that it was you who wrote a letter to the esteemed company(删除) boss, regarding as(删除) my qualifications ,education back –ground ,and my special skills at computer program which i have a huge intrest in(删除). Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! please(首字母大写)accept my gratitude.

My sincerely,
Li Ming

4分

微点评：作文内容很丰富，但是你的表达能力还有待提高，而且要注意书信的写作格式，以及大小写的问题。

第五篇

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing, I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty.It seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

修改意见：

Dear teacher,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help to improve my English. If it had not been for your assistance in the respect of English writing(in 后面应该加动名词，此外，respect 是尊敬的意思，用词不当), I fear that I would have been so outstanding achievement.(这句话是虚拟语气，意思是如果不是你的帮助，我恐怕将会…)

Every one agrees that it was you who are kindness and duty(it was…who…是个强调句，这句话的意思是每个人都说是你…例如帮助我)It seems that you don’t feel tired forever. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

2分

微点评：英语的句号是.你的英语基础比较薄弱，建议你多看看英语范文，背一些模版。

5-7分

第一篇

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely the list of reference books which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save munch valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

修改意见：

Dear Pro. Smith,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your assistance. If it had not been for your assistance in sending timely(删掉)the list of reference books(加to me timely) which I asked for, I fear that I would have not been achieved my essay on(改为by ) the deadline.

Everyone agrees that it was you who save(改为saved) munch (拼写错误，改为much)valuable time for me to search the reference books in the library and these reference books which are rather professional conform to the requirements of my essay. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

6分

微点评：写作文时要再细心一些，尽量避免单词拼写的错误。时态要保持前后一致。

第二篇

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot find the way coming back.

Everyone agrees that it was you who patiently guide me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

修改意见：

Dear Bob,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your warm reception in this travel (改为in the journey)abroad. If it had not been for your assistance in this traveling (改为on the trip)that you are as a guide for me, I fear that I would have been lost so that I cannot(改为couldn’t) find the way coming back.

Every one agrees that it was you who patiently guide(改为guided) me to every tourist attractions and explain some of peculiar stories about sceneries. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

6分

微点评：作文写得还不错，但应保持时态的前后一致以及固定搭配。

第三篇

Dear Teacher,

2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：感谢信|考研英语作文(2)
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